Introduction
The intended way to write an introduction:
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very catchy and cheeky 2-3 lines to make the reader interested.
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the core problem in a very precise 1 or 2 line, without mentioning too many details. the current intro is good, small change suggested:
They say everyone in this world is running , and They say the world is running on money , where does that leave us
We give you the economic data information , can you predict the 1 Month CD Rate ?